Okay, I'm going to get you to go from this:
- Quote :
- Moon Walked out of the den, and sat down. She looked up at her mate Damieon and smiled.
TO this:
- Quote :
- Moon padded out of the den, sniffing the air, and listening for anything that seemed strange. Finding nothing, She looked around, using her teal hued eyes to scan the terrain, and still seeing nothing, reclined on a slime covered rock, the color of moss, letting a sigh escape her maw. She looked back into the dome like cave, that served as the pack's den, and watched as a sandy tinted male walked toward her, his name, Damieon. She felt the corners of her mouth pull up at the mere sight of her friend, and mate.
So, Some Rules:
1. Be respectful, this is a privileged, not a right.
2, Listen to your teacher, their here to help
3. Feel free to ask questions if you don't know something.
4. Have Fun!
RolePlay LocationWe will be RPing in a Valley, full of prey, and predators alike.
LegendThese are the symbols you will see by the Student's name, showing they have completed a current skill. For a better understanding of these symbols, I have provided a brief explanation next to each key symbol for you.
✓ - Doing well: When you see the green check mark next to your name, followed by a goal symbol, it means you are doing a good job with that particular goal. Keep it up and hopefully soon you will complete it!
✘ - Needs more work: The red 'x' next to your name, followed by a goal symbol, indicates that you will need to do more practice on this goal. You will probably want to focus more of your attention on the goals with this red x next to so you can improve on them. Don't be intimidated by the red 'x', it just shows you need more work, and not necessarily that you are doing poorly on the task(s) it appears next to.
■ - Not started: If you see an orange square next to your name, followed by a goal symbol, it simply means that goal hasn't started yet, therefore you won't need to worry about it just yet. The square will be replaced with either the green check mark or the red 'x' once your capability with the goal has been determined.
★ - Completed: When the yellow stars appears next to your name, and a symbol for the goal, feel free to jump up and dance around! This means you have finished this goal, and will need no further work with it during your time here.
% - Percentage of progress: For example, if you see ABC 70%, that means you have completed 70% of your spelling training. So, that's basically it.
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Current Goals and Their Symbols*Note: more goals may be added, depending on what you want to learn.
* -Grammar: Try to stick to the rules of grammar as strictly as you can. For example, always remember to start a new paragraph when needed, but also remember not to do this too often or not often enough. Creating a new paragraph too often makes everything look choppy, while not creating paragraphs often enough will make it look jumbled.
ABC -Spelling: While spelling isn't the most important thing, try to have at least a standard way of spelling words, and don't make too many mistakes.. It is understandable to sometimes mix words up (like to and too), and also to get a long word spelled wrong (like Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious, ha!). But for the most part, try your best to spell mostly everything correctly, and use a spell check if you're having trouble!
~ -Post Length: While it isn't that big a deal how long you post in this site, it does help if your make your post at least a few sentences. In my opinion, having a beefy post allows for more detail. So you will be watched for this as well.
If you wish to become a student, PM me this:
UserName: (On here)
What you want to learn:
Example of your RP skills: (Just a random post from a RP, on here, or from somewhere else)Students Currently Learning:None
Idea from the African Stars Pack. (C)